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Band 4+: The maps below show the changes that have taken place at an Australian Zoo between 1960 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image includes two maps labeled "1960" and "Now," showing changes over time. In 1960, key locations were the Harbour, Gift shop, Picnic area, African animals, Australian animals, Birds, Chimpanzees, and Seal show. The layout included a Gift shop centrally positioned with pathways leading to areas featuring African animals, Australian animals, Chimpanzees, Birds, and Seal show, plus a Picnic area located to the far right. The "Now" map presents the Harbour, Entrance, Ferry, Wild animals, African animals, Australian animals, Seal show, Gift shop, Cable car, and Picnic area. The Gift shop remains centrally located, with pathways extending to Wild animals, Australian animals, African animals, Seal show, and a Cable car leading to the Picnic area. Key additions include the Entrance and Ferry near the Harbour, and a Cable car system connecting various sections to the Picnic area.

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This graph shows that the Australian Zoo 1960’s and now . 1960 Australian Zoo under the area this zoo s westest left side African animals and Australian animals, middle order areas fill up birds,seal show,chimpanzees and southest down side ares booked by gift shop. Also eastest side booked by picnic ares and western side harbour shop.

Australian zoo now west left side areas presenting new animals .Its wild animal and Australian animals .Nortern side intererence gate to freey and middle order areas booked by African animals,seal show and new iteam added this zoo its a cable car.Sothest side down areas booked by gift shop theneastern right side areas are picnic area.

in conclusion,1960 Australian Zoo and now Australian Zoo are very different iteam and uniqe and this is very beautiful zoo.This Zoo main features is trhis different animals and gift shop.Now Australian Zoo presenting new arrival Ferry and cable car so its a very different araival.

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task by describing some changes to the zoo. However, the writing contains significant grammatical errors and lacks clear organization, making it difficult to follow. The report also includes some irrelevant or inaccurate information. To improve, focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure, organizing the information more logically (e.g., by area of the zoo), and providing more specific details about the changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The sentences are disjointed, making it difficult to follow the changes in the zoo layout. Use cohesive devices to link ideas and create a smoother flow. Consider organizing the report by area (e.g., west, middle, east) and then comparing the changes in each area between 1960 and now.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often inaccurate. There are instances of incorrect word choice and awkward phrasing. Expand your vocabulary related to describing maps and changes over time. Use more precise language to describe locations and features.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and sentence structure problems. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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