Band 6: You recently visited a museum in your local town and had a very poor experience. Write a letter to the manager of the museum. In your letter: * explain when you visited and what the problems were * say what the impact of these problems was * suggest what you would like the manager to do (User-Written IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample)

Dear Sir or madam,

I visited our Arts and Culture museum last week with my family. Unfortunately, I witnessed some concerning issues regarding the care of artefacts and paintings placed on the top floor of the museum. The highly valuable paintings preserved in this building are degrading due lack of proper care and facilities.

To begin with, the top floor is prone to leakage in rainy season and water seeps into the paintings through the holes in the walls, this has destroyed some of the fined arts from the last century. Furthermore, increasing population of mice in the building have torn down some of the precious collection of antique clothes kept on this floor of the building. Some people are developing a view that this museum is not safe for the preservation of such valuable items and everything should be transferred to another city.

So it a kind request from our side, to resolve these issues and preserve the valuable items of our museum. So that, our culturally significant artefacts can be conveniently placed in our local town’s museum.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Simrat

Band 6+: You recently visited a museum in your local town and had a very poor experience. Write a letter to the manager of the museum. In your letter: * explain when you visited and what the problems were * say what the impact of these problems was * suggest what you would like the manager to do

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