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Band 5+: You recently bought a product that did not work properly. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter, describe the problem with the product, explain what happened, and say what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to tell you about something wrong with an electronic device which is I bought it two days ago in your store.

Two days ago I bought earphones in your store but when I try to use it, it does not work properly and does not have sound on the left. So I can not listening well. It is made me stressed at the time and I fell disappointed.

I hope you can help me to overcome this problem. Probably you have to replace the earphones to new item. Additionally if you can not to replace you have to change my money slightly because I think this item is quite expensive.

So that is it for my letter, I hove you can accept a solution and do it slightly.

Kind regards,

Jay.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by describing the problem, explaining the contact with the store (implicitly), and stating the desired action. There are some minor language errors and awkward phrasing, but the overall message is clear. To improve, focus on using more precise language and structuring the letter with clearer paragraphing. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs for better readability. For example, transition words and phrases can help guide the reader through your explanation and request. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the issue to maintain clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more specific terms related to the electronic device and the problem you experienced. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'wrong,' consider alternatives like 'malfunctioning' or 'defective.' Also, avoid informal language such as 'So that is it for my letter,' and replace it with a more formal closing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct article usage. For example, 'which is I bought it' should be rephrased for grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and ensure that your sentences are grammatically sound to convey your message effectively. Also, be careful with punctuation, especially commas and apostrophes.

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