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Band 8+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mark,

I was really sorry to hear that you are finding it difficult to setttle into your new school. Changing schools can be tough, but i’m sure things will get better soon.

One way to make new friends is to start small try talking to classmates during breaks or group projects. Even a simple smile or offering help can open the door to new conversations. People usually appreciate kindness and will respond positively.

Another great idea is to join clubs or take part in school activities. Wether its sports, music, drama, or debate club, these are perfect opportunities to meet poeple who share your interests. Being part of a team or group will naturally help you build connections and feel more included.

Finally, don’t be too hard on yourself. Fitting in takes time, so be patient and stay confident. Remember, everyone feels nervous in new situations, but with a positive attitude, you will soon find your place. Keep being yourself, because that is the best way to attract genuine friends.

Take care, and let me know how things go.

Best wishes,

Amit

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Overall Band Score

8

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

9

The letter fully satisfies the requirements of the task. It provides relevant and comprehensive advice to the friend, covering all the points mentioned in the prompt effectively. The suggestions are practical and well-explained, and the tone is supportive and encouraging.

Coherence & Cohesion

8

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The advice is presented logically, and the paragraphs are well-managed. The use of cohesive devices is effective, contributing to a smooth and coherent flow of ideas.

Lexical Resource

8

A good range of vocabulary is used appropriately. The language is natural and conveys the message effectively. Consider using more varied vocabulary to further enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar and sentence structure. There are only a few minor errors. Pay close attention to punctuation and proofread carefully to eliminate such errors.

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