Map

Band 7+: The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image depicts two floor plans labeled "10 years ago" and "Today." Ten years ago, areas included Garden, Car park, Entrance, Reception, Storage, Hall (seats for 100), Coffee bar, Toilets, three Offices, Kitchen. Today, changes feature Indoor sports, alterations putting Storage and Toilets in new positions, a Cafe area replacing Coffee bar, and a reshuffle placing Kitchen, Office, Toilets distinctly different with maintained areas like Car park, Entrance, Reception, and Hall (seats for 100).

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The maps depict how a community center has changed since ten years ago.

Overall, some rooms were refunctioned and relocated with the removal of cafe area and garden while an indoor sports room was constructed. In spite of some changes, there were some spaces that remained untouched such as: entrance, car park, hall and kitchen.

In terms of the western side of the community center, there was a garden at the top but it was converted into an indoor sports area. The car park below it and an entrance at the bottom were left intact throughout the ten years period.

Moving to the middle of the community center, the storage at the top was shrinked a half into the left side to make space for toilets while the hall in the centre of the community center with one hundred seats stayed unchanged. On the south of the hall, the reception area and the cloakroom below it were left intact but the office on the right-handed side was separated into a coffee bar (at the opposite side of the reception area) and toilets.

Regarding the eastern side of the community center, four office rooms at the top and the storage below them were merged into a cafe area. The kitchen on the southern side of them was kept untouched throughout a 10-year period.

Word Count: 222

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

community: 5

center: 5

below: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and changes to the community center over the 10-year period. The organization is clear, with a logical progression from west to middle to east of the center. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., stating the kitchen remained untouched when it was relocated) and omissions (e.g., not mentioning the relocation of the kitchen and offices). To improve, ensure all significant changes are noted and verified for accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and overall structure. The information is presented logically, and the use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall,' 'In terms of,' 'Moving to,' and 'Regarding' helps to guide the reader through the changes. However, there are instances where the transitions between ideas could be smoother. For example, the shift from the western side to the middle of the community center could be more explicitly linked. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the flow and connection between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to describing changes in a floor plan. Words like 'refunctioned,' 'relocated,' 'converted,' 'intact,' 'shrinked,' and 'merged' are used appropriately. However, there are opportunities to use more precise and sophisticated vocabulary to elevate the description. For instance, instead of 'shrinked a half,' you could use 'reduced in size by half.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition, such as varying how you describe areas that remained unchanged.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'the storage at the top was shrinked a half into the left side to make space for toilets' contains an awkward phrasing and a grammatical error ('shrinked' should be 'shrunk'). Also, the statement 'four office rooms at the top and the storage below them were merged into a cafe area' is not entirely accurate based on the visual description, as the kitchen was also affected. Pay closer attention to verb tenses, word choice, and sentence structure to improve accuracy. Proofreading carefully can help catch these errors.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the transformation of a community over a decade. Overall, the community centre offers more amenities and recreation areas compared to the past. While the center hall, reception, cloakroom, car park and kitchen remain, others experience distinct modifications. With regard to the center of the community center, there were several changes that […]

Band 7+

The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate a community center 10 years ago compare to now. Overall, the center has undergone significant transformation, shifting from a simple layout to a modern background. The renovation of office areas contributes the most changes of center while several areas have remained unchanged. Regarding to the old map, it used to have office […]

Band 6+

The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Band 6+

The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the maps give detailed information about changes taking place Community center from 10 years and today Overall, it is clearly that, will be dramatic change in the structure of Community center particularly in the development Cafe area. it is worth mentioning that hall and parking will more or less unchanged over the given period. Looking […]

Band 5+

See All

The maps show auniversity library in 2005 and the same library today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The maps provide data on layout of library in 2005 and its apperance today. Overall, it is eviden that the area witnessed variety of significant enhencements, with addition of automated book borrowing utility in the west and new privite study desks, which is built in the middle of the library. It is worth noting that […]

Band 5+

Summarize the changes in the Layout of the Woodwards University in 1985 and now

The maps illustrate a comparison between the present layout and the layout in 1985 of Woodwards University. Overall, there are considerable changes in the present layout. The most obvious changes are in the buildings and the footpaths used to connect each building. In 1985, the library was located in the northwest of the map, near […]

Band 7+

Summarize the changes in the Layout of the Woodwards University in 1985 and now

The maps illustrate the comparison between the present layout and the layout in 1985 of Woodwards university. Overall, there is a considerable changes in the present layout. the most obvious changes are in the buildings and the footpaths use to connect to each building. In 1985, the library was located on the north west of […]

Band 5+

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps compare the layout of the outskirts of the town in Fosbury between 1980 and 2015, showing the significant the significant developments that took place. Overall, the area undewent considireable development over the period, with many buildings being introduced and several original features being removed. In the first map, there was a lot […]

Band 4+

Write full task 1 report based on a map. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

The diagrams illustrate the transformation of a bookstore in 2000 and now. Overall, there was a significant transformation in north and changes in the centre and in north east of the bookstore. In 2000, Fiction category of bookstore was lied in two locations: in north and in the north east side of the place. But, […]

Band 5+

The two maps below show the changes in a town called Dalton from 1815 to 2015. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrare the differances in Dalton town between 1815 and 2015 Overall, Dalton town transformed from agracultural and green space to modernized and residantional area. Most significiant change was green spaces were devided two part and modified residential area which was located in northern of the town and also had built industrial zone in […]

Band 4+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium