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Band 5+: Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people. Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?

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Some Individuals share their concerns regarding raising interest in shopping among young people. They believe that shopping is the waste of time and money and that youngsters should be fostered to take up some other activities that will have more benefits. Personally, I convinced, that making purchases it is not only spending resources but the way of relaxing for youth . Thereby, I think ,it is unnecessary to limit shopping time.

To begin with, shopping is provide young people an opportunity to get distracted from their labour , such as study and work . Performing such tasks every day are likely to be extremely exhausted for person’s brain. Therefore, shopping may be an excellent way to address this issue and increase productivity. Furthermore, according to researches , acquisition of new goods lifts individuals mood and self esteem. For example, new clothes may enhance the people’s figure and,correspondingly, raise their confidence. Clothes are also the way of self expression which positively affects to young people.

Proponents of shopping,argue that it pose a difficulties with wasting time and cash . However, I believe that it will not, be a grave problem , because the huge proponent of young people are already familiar with the financial literacy and time management.

In conclusion, doing purchases is became popular ,because it allows youth groups to relax after workday and increases dopamine level that positively impact on youth. Despite on some possible risks, shopping remains the suitable approach for youngsters to rest .

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