Line Graph

Band 5+: The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows UK acid rain emissions in million tonnes from various sectors from 1991 to 2007: Transport and Communication decreased from 3.4 (1991) to 0.2 (2007), Electricity, Gas and Water Supply dropped from 2.2 (1991) to 0.5 (2007), Other Industries fell from 1.2 (1991) to 0.4 (2007), Domestic fell from ~0.6 (1991) to ~0.1 (2007).

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The shown line graph represents four various industries in terms of the quantity of acid rain discharges that evaluated in the period between 1991 and 2007 in the UK.

Overall,it can be clearly seen that the indicator of electricity,gas and water had the highest acid rain emissions in the period whereas, the value of transport and communication had the same level.

Getting back to the details it is obvious that the rate of domestic industries were around 0.6 million tonnes of acid rain emissions from 1991 to 1993. Then it had minimally fell to 0.5 million in 1995 and it remained going down until the final year of the given period.

It is also interesting to note that, in 1991 other industries initially held the second dominated line in the emissions of acid rain,totalling at roughly 2.2 million tonnes.Additionally, it had significantly reduced at approximately 1.2 million in the end of the period of 17 years.

Word Count: 156

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
Continue to challenge and refine your language choices.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

million: 4

industries: 3

period: 3

emissions: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The overview is weak and doesn't fully capture the main trends. The body paragraphs contain some data inaccuracies and lack sufficient detail. To improve, focus on providing a more comprehensive overview and ensuring accuracy in data reporting. Also, try to include more specific comparisons and details to support your observations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information could be improved. The introduction is present, and there's an attempt at an overview. However, the connections between sentences and paragraphs are not always clear, leading to some choppiness. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. For example, transition words and phrases could be used to signal relationships between different points in the data. Paragraphing could also be improved by grouping related information together more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and some word choices are not entirely appropriate or precise. For example, 'the shown line graph' is not the most accurate way to describe the visual, and 'evaluated' is not the best word to describe the changes in emissions. To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to trends, quantities, and comparisons. Consider using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'the indicator of electricity, gas and water had the highest acid rain emissions' contains awkward phrasing and incorrect grammar. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures accurately and paying close attention to grammatical rules. Proofreading carefully for errors in tense, agreement, and word order is also essential.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

The graph shows the number of students enrolled in online courses from 2015 to 2020.

The line graph illustrates the number of students enrolled in online courses from 2015 to 2020.Overall, the number of students increased significantly throughout the period, with a peak at end of the period, while the lowest figure was recorded at the beginning. The noteable feature is that the continuous increase of students between 2015 to […]

Band 6+

The graph below shows information from a 2011 report about energy consumption in the UK since 1978 with projections until 2038. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the amount of energy consumption in the UK from 1978 to 2038 in six different types, namely Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural gas, Nuclear, Solar and Wind, and Hydropower. Overall, the given graph highlights significant variations in the energy consumption among six categories over a period, Where Petrol and Oil is […]

Band 6+

the graph below shows the percentage of population in cities since 1970s with projection to 2030

The exhibited line graph illustrates/compares the proportion of city dweller from 1970 with a projected percentage for 2030. Overall, it is expected that the proportion of urban inhabitants (urban population) in all four nations will show an upward trend over the entire period with China witnessing the most significant growth. In addition, the USA is […]

Band 9

Task 1: The graph below compares SAT math results according to gender from 1992 to 2000 in a particular school.

The line chart shows comparison regarding SAT math results categorized by gender from 1992 to 2000 in a particular school. Overall, both lines showed an increase and reached a peak at the end of the period. In addition, the line for male was higher than that for female throughout the course of time. The line […]

Band 7+

The line graph shows the percentage of people using public transport in Germany, Canada and Brazil between 2000 and 2020.

The line graph illustrates percentage of people using transport in Germany,Canada and Brazil from 2000 to 2020. Overall,the use of public transport in Germany and Brazil showed fluctuating trends,ehile the use of public transport in Canada showed an increasing trend.İn the begining Germany’s trend was the highest but Canada exceeded Germany in the end. In […]

Band 5+

The graph below shows US college enrollment numbers (in millions) over a period of 40 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph provides the US college enrollment numbers (in millions) across the period of 4 decades, from 1980 to 2020. At first glance, the number of public and private colleges enrollments in the US experienced a surge, while the former was the highest, the letter was the lowest its stay the same by […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium