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Band 8+: Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret,

My name is Sebastian and I am 29 years old. I am very interested in this job opportunity. I could help you with household tasks like cooking, cleaning, and organizing the house. I could also go to the supermarket and help with shopping whenever necessary.

I am responsible and always try to do my best in every task. I am also punctual, respectful, and I learn quickly. In previous experiences, I have worked with different people and I always maintained a good relationship with them. I enjoy helping others and keeping everything clean and organized.

I would really like this work because I am saving money for a trip to Australia in the near future, which is one of my main goals. I will be available to work from Monday to Saturday, and I will not be available on Sundays because I play football with friends, which is an important activity for me.

Thank you for your time.

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8.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear suggestions for assistance, reasons for interest, and availability details. The tone is appropriate and the language is accurate and effective.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is effective, and the transitions between ideas are smooth. To further enhance coherence, consider using more varied cohesive devices to connect sentences and paragraphs, creating an even more seamless flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and demonstrates a good range. The language is natural and effectively conveys the writer's interest and suitability for the job. To aim for a higher score, try incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary related to household tasks and personal qualities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates excellent grammatical control with a wide range of structures used accurately. Punctuation is appropriate throughout. The few minor errors do not detract from the overall clarity and effectiveness of the letter.

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