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Band 6+: The line chart below shows the employment rate in four different industries in Australia from 1985 to 2015, in five-year intervals. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph, with the x-axis representing years from 1985 to 2015 and the y-axis representing job growth ranging from 0 to 60. Four lines represent four different industries: Technology (navy blue), Healthcare (purple), Construction (pink), and Retail (red). Technology starts at around 10 in 1985 and increases to around 55 in 2015. Healthcare starts at around 10 in 1985 and increases to around 60 in 2015. Construction starts above 20 in 1985 and slightly decreases in 1995 before climbing to around 50 in 2015. Retail starts around 15 in 1985, peaks around 20 in 2000, and then steadily declines to around 5 in 2015.

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The line graph illustrates the rate of employment in four distinct industries in Australia between 1985 and 2015, in five-year intervals. Overall, three of the four industries recorded a rise in the jobness rate throughout the period, except for Retail industry. Although Retail industry started with the highest jobness rate, it ended with the lowest rate among the four industries.

Starting at roughly 15% in 1985, the propotion of employment in Retail industry was the highest. In addition, the figure went up marginally by 8% for the next ten years before dropping constantly to around 5% in 2015.

The percentage of jobness in Technology industry was the second highest, at 14%, which was just 1% higher than that in Healthcare. Nevertheless, the figure for Healthcare overtook Tetail and Technology industries in the first five years and continued to grow, before being surpassed by Technology between 2000 and 2005 and ending with the second employment rate in 2015, at 60%. The 30-year period witnessed a continuous upward trend from 9% to 51% in employment rate in Construction category. The jobness rate in Technology industry was at 55% in the last year.

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industry: 5

employment: 4

jobness: 4

technology: 4

industries: 3

retail: 3

highest: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the graph and provides a clear overview of the trends. There is a good attempt to make comparisons between the different industries. However, the use of non-standard terminology such as 'jobness rate' and 'jobness' is repetitive and inaccurate; using terms like 'employment rate' or 'proportion of workers' would be more appropriate. Additionally, there are some minor inaccuracies in the data description (e.g., stating Retail started as the highest when the visual description suggests Construction was higher), though the overall trends are captured well. To improve, focus on using more precise academic vocabulary and ensuring all comparative claims align strictly with the data provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas within the final paragraph is somewhat disjointed. The transition between discussing Healthcare, Technology, and Construction is abrupt, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparative flow. To improve, try to group industries with similar trends together more effectively or use more sophisticated cohesive devices to link the comparison of different sectors.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat repetitive and includes non-standard terminology. The term 'jobness rate' is not a standard English expression; instead, use 'employment rate,' 'level of employment,' or 'proportion of workers.' Additionally, there are spelling errors such as 'propotion' and 'Tetail.' To reach a higher band, aim for a wider range of academic synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' and ensure that all technical terms are used accurately and naturally.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are frequent errors in article usage (e.g., 'in Retail industry' should be 'in the Retail industry') and some awkward phrasing that affects the smoothness of the reading experience. While the meaning is generally clear, increasing the precision of your grammatical structures - particularly regarding definite articles and prepositional phrases - will significantly improve the overall quality.

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