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Band 7+: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people argue that primary schools focus too much on formal learning. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? How important do you think it is for children to play as well as learn in the primary school classroom? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Whether primary schools are focusing too much on formal learning has become a subject of heated debate. While some people argue that primary schools focus too much on academic lessons, others believe that this is essential for building a solid foundation for the children’s future. From my perspective, balanced learning that includes both formal learning and playing is crucial for young learners.

First of all, balanced learning greatly increases children’s passion for learning. If children are forced to stay in their seats and listen to a whole lesson of 45 minutes, they will feel bored and their mind will not focus on the content of the lesson. In contrast, if the teacher guides students through various hands-on activities in a lesson, 45 minutes will pass by so fast for students because they are really concentrating on the course material and applying the knowledge in real life, which furthermore provokes their interest of learning and creativity.

Additionally, a learning style that balance formal lessons and playing helps develop children’s communication skills. Communication is a vital skill that people develop throughout their education process. Playing in the primary school classroom exposes children to social situations, which significantly increase their opportunities to collaborate with peers and express their ideas confidently.

In conclusion, while formal education is still necessary for academic growth, putting too much pressure on young learners with rigid lessons can diminish their motivation. Therefore, I believe that primary schools should integrate play into the classroom, since it not only provokes a love for learning but also nurtures essential social skills.

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