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Band 4+: Some people argue that primary schools focus too much on formal learning. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? How important do you think it is for children to play as well as learn in the primary school classroom?

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Some individuals believe that elementary schools concentrate too much on formal learning, and think how it is necessary play as well as learn in the primary school classroom. I completely disagree with this opinion because all educational centers have to focus on discipline. I think playing is not important because of they have many time to rest and play from school.

I consider that in schools children must pay attention on study. In other words, grade schools are not place for entertainment because in schools teachers must teach pupils for the first way discipline. To be clear, people without discipline cannot get higher education. People with discipline understand how pay attention on essential things, and elementary school must help them with it. Formal learning with their rules assises young students get it. For example, students have schedule which help them not late to school, and they must wear special uniform in Kazakhstan.

In my opinion, children have not to play games in school. In other words, they are have many time and entertainment locations as theme park, attractions, playgrounds, and other places to rest. Also, students who study in primary school have not a heavy schdule and hard subjects like chemistry, physics, and others. As a result, they have more free time for playing and self-development. For instance, pupils who study in first grade have maximum four subjects in per day in Kazakhstan.

In conclusion, for me it is necessary focus on formal learning, and study without playing in grade schools.

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