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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear sir and madam,

My name is Teena malhotra, I am an employee in your organization. I am writing this letter to request you that a training program is organizing in UK and I am interesting to learn about new things as I want to grow into my field. I am requesting you that can you please arrange this role to me as well because as I know that the head of the course is also one of the participants in this training.

First and foremost ,I am telling you that this is a course of special events and I am a fashion designer and this course help me to improve in my designing ,as when I am designing a house then there is some difficulty I am facing and it fullfills my wish and I learn it with this training. As some of my customer also give me feedback and problem they are facing ,so I want to fulfill their wishes and improve my work .

Furthermore, I also know from my colleagues that this training can solve many problem which I am face, so please give me some information regarding this as this would help me for my career .I know some of the information but not too much .

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

training: 3

course: 3

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but contains significant irrelevant and inaccurate information. The purpose of the letter (expressing interest in the social events organizer role) is not clearly stated, and key points such as requesting more information about the role and explaining relevant experience are poorly addressed or missing. The letter focuses on personal training needs rather than the specific role. To improve, clearly state your interest in the social events organizer role, ask specific questions about duties and expectations, and provide concrete examples of relevant experience (e.g., organizing events, social activities).

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. The purpose is not clearly stated at the beginning, and the ideas are jumbled. Consider organizing the letter into distinct paragraphs: one for expressing interest, one for requesting information, and one for explaining experience. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive (e.g., 'training', 'designing'). There are errors in word choice (e.g., 'interesting' instead of 'interested', 'organizing' instead of 'organized'). To improve, use a wider range of vocabulary related to events organization and training. Practice using collocations and more precise terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'is organizing' instead of 'is being organized'), subject-verb agreement issues, and missing articles. Punctuation is inconsistent (e.g., missing commas, incorrect capitalization). Focus on basic sentence structures and proofread for common mistakes.

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