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Band 5+: You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write the letter to the course tutor. In your letter: -Describe your situation -Explain why you cannot continue at this time -Say what action you would like to do

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Dear sir,

I am writing with regard to inform you that I am able to continue my part-time english speaking course.

Working as an full time emloyee in one of the multi-national company, I have assigned with resposible task and duties along with that I am not getting enough time to do my course.

As I am aware of our english speaking classes schedule is Wednesday to Friday 5 PM to 6 PM, now my company extended my working hours from 8 PM to 6 PM. Considering this timing of my work I do not have any space between to attend classes.

I have two solutions in this matter. Firstly, I would like to change the timing of classes with 6 PM to 7 PM. Secondly, if change of the time will not possible then please isssue the refund of my course.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Kind Regards,

Zalak Vyas

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The explanation of the situation and the proposed solutions are clear.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and transitions. Some grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter conveys the main message, numerous grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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