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Band 4+: Some believe that the commercialization and uniformity of music lead to a loss of cultural identity. However, others argue that globalisation and the spread of popular music have facilitated cultural exchange and helped to promote understanding and tolerance between different communities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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At the modern world all the things getting more and more globalised, commercialized, specially music, which is splits people to the two groups, one of them consider, that this practice is a way to lose cultural identity, while others believe that it is actually a good point to promote understanding and tolerance between different people.

Of course, the theme of commercialization and uniformity of music depends on every single one on the world, and it has two sides of view, each of them has it’s own pros and cons. As the first opinion people think, that music will make people loss of cultural identity. The main reason of this is that most of the persons started to listen more and more music, that not actually depends on his origin, for example, if a man from India will listen only American music he will slightly take all the American things, do some strange staff, that not allowed in India, and will lose that culture code. The second point, that this kind of people, who like to listen music not from his area is they shound started to forget their own language, and it is a some part of cultural identity too, the power of language in every culture is strong tool, which coding our mindset for every day. As the final reason, the commercialization of music make this way of art is more typical and identical with each other, people just want to grow some money and they do not trying to make this one good.

On the other hand, we have the opinion, that says that globalisation help different people from different countries express cultural exchange. The first idea is that all the persons from the world can listen the same music, the same musicians, that might be singing on the other languages, which can help people to increase their skill of writing, speaking, reading in that language, and in that point people started to communicate more easily with the men and women with different cultures. As the second point, people can strongly get more tolerance to some strange ways to impress their feelings, to the culture specias, and they might be not strange, but for the people, that live on the opposite sides of the planet, the way people show themselves are different and may be not usual. As the last point some people consider that spread of popular music can improve culture exchange with a some group of people, for example one song writer just wrote the song about his culture, about how they spend their days in America, on the other side of the planet people in India will learn more about that life just to listening to American music and it is so impressive.

In conclution, it is important to say, that commercialization and globalisation has a strong effect on the all people on this planet, specially for the music, which is called a “language of people”. Some say that it will destroy cultural identity of every person, others believe that it can be a good teacher for them, who will show them a different cultures. As for me, I consider, that the music is actually the way people in the all world can communicate with each other, it can actually help all of us to cultural exchange and promote tolerance with different groups of people

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