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Band 4+: 📊 Task 1 Prompt: Bar Chart The bar chart below shows the number of books read per year by men and women at Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014. Write introduction, overview and body Year Men Women 2011 4,000 5,000 2012 8,000 10,000 2013 10,000 12,000 2014 14,000 10,000

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The image displays a table detailing annual book readership at a library from 2011 to 2014, listing numbers for men and women per year: in 2011, men read 4,000 books and women 5,000; in 2012, men read 8,000 and women 10,000; in 2013, men read 10,000 while women read 12,000; and in 2014, men read 14,000 compared to women's 10,000.

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The table illustrates how number of Burnaby Public Library readers has changed annually from 2011 to 2014 between genders.

Overall, both group of readers had steady growth in their amount for three years. Despite the majority of library’s community were women, this was surpassed by men in the last year.

The total number in 2011 was 9000 which is split between men (4000) and women (5000). This figures had cultivated to 8000 and 10000 between both boys and girls back in 2012, respectively. In 2013, when two genders increased numbers to ten thousand and twelve thousand, female readers rate had crucially decreased in the next year, however male’s rate, reversively, grew up to the 14000 readers in the same year. Finally, 14000 men readers and 10000 women readers remained in this statistics of Burnaby Public library in 2014.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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readers: 6

between: 3

women: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and provides a clear overview of the data. However, there are several inaccuracies in word choice and terminology that affect clarity. For instance, referring to adult library users as 'boys and girls' is inappropriate for the context, and using 'rate' to describe absolute numbers is mathematically incorrect. Additionally, some phrasing is awkward (e.g., 'this figures had cultivated to'). To improve, focus on using precise vocabulary for data description (e.g., 'figures,' 'totals,' or 'numbers' instead of 'rates') and ensure subject-verb agreement throughout the response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and incorrect word choices. For instance, the use of 'reversively' and 'crucially' does not fit the context of describing data trends. To improve, focus on using standard cohesive devices and transition words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Conversely', 'Subsequently') to link your observations more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary, but many words are used inaccurately or inappropriately for an academic report. Terms like 'boys and girls' are unsuitable for describing adult library users (men and women), and 'cultivated' is not the correct verb for describing numerical increases. Additionally, 'rate' is used when 'number' or 'figure' would be more appropriate. Aim to use precise academic collocations such as 'showed an upward trend', 'experienced a decline', or 'reached a peak'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that impact clarity. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'both group of readers', 'this figures'), article usage ('how number of'), and awkward sentence structures. There are also errors in noun forms (e.g., 'men readers'). To improve, practice using complex sentence structures more accurately and ensure that singular and plural nouns are consistently matched with their corresponding verbs and determiners.

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