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Band 4+: A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you are not available on that date. Give your friend another alternate date for the visit. In your letter, you should: apologise for it explain what you are doing on that date suggest to him/her an alternate time to come

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Dear Vikas.

I relived your messuge about your plan to visit my city. I am mose than excited about plan. I am So sorry but I would not be available on that date.

I and my husband had Planned Vaction during that dang week. we would be in mexico for a week for our vaction due, we would be cathere from a nd June,2024 to 9th June, 2024.

I think it woul be great if you could change the date. I would be all free after ath June.

What do you think would work best for you?

Let me know please.

Again I Apologise for the inconvenience. I un 100king foxward to see you soon. yours lovingy,

Riya

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by apologizing for not being available on the planned date, explaining the reason for the unavailability, and suggesting an alternate date for the visit. However, there are some minor errors in addressing the task, such as misspelling 'Vikas' and 'message'. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some issues with paragraphing, and some sentences could be better connected for smoother flow.

Lexical Resource

There is a range of vocabulary used, but there are several spelling and word choice errors throughout the letter. Work on improving accuracy and using more precise vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are several grammatical errors present, such as subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and punctuation errors. Focus on improving accuracy in grammar.

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