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Band 4+: A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you are not available on that date. Give your friend another alternate date for the visit. In your letter, you should: apologise for it explain what you are doing on that date suggest to him/her an alternate time to come

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Dear Palak,

I hope you are well! Thanks for agreeing for the visit to my house during summer.I was super excited to meet you ,unfortunately I don’t think that I would be staying at home during the summer.

Me and my family have planned a trip to go to Shimla on May 5 which is located in Himalaya Pradesh during Summer where we would be spending like 20 days and 19 nights. After a long time our family would be gathering so that would be an exciting moment for me.

Moreover, I’m coming back on May 25 and after that probably you can visit to my house on May 26 anytime during evening. Let me know if that date works for you or you have any other plans for that day.

Take care of yourself .

Yours lovingly,

Hardi

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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would: 4

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Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by apologizing for not being available on the planned date and suggesting an alternate time for the visit. However, the explanation of what the writer is doing on the original date is not clear. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The message is somewhat clear but lacks coherence and cohesion. There are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Transition words could be used to improve the overall structure.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately. Additionally, there are errors in word choice and awkward phrasing that affect the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation errors and tense inconsistencies also impact the overall accuracy.

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