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Band 6+: A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the recent advertisement for a waitress job in the local paper yesterday. Currently, I am working as a waitress in the nearby club, The New Moon, for 2 months, full-time from 4 pm to 1 am. I am relocating to the area near your restaurant next week.

Althoug h I have bee n working as a waitress for a short time, I am the main person at my place. I am a very dedicated, committed, and hardworking person, and I can learn and adapt easily to the requirements. Also, I am looking forward to more pay than I am earning now.

I can att end an interview this Saturday evening from 4 pm to 8 pm. I am open to communication and positively waiting for the interview call.

With regards,

Lia

Word Count: 139

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
waitress: 3
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Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task requirements by explaining the current situation, describing suitability, and stating interview availability. There are some minor grammatical errors and the letter could benefit from more elaboration on skills and experience to strengthen the application. For example, you could include specific examples of your skills and experience as a waitress, and elaborate on why you are looking for a new job. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The letter is generally coherent and organized, but there are some areas where the flow could be improved. Consider adding transition words or phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, you could use phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition to' to build upon your points. Also, ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and purpose to enhance the overall coherence of your letter.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of variety and sophistication. Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words to make your letter more engaging. For instance, instead of saying 'I am a very dedicated, committed, and hardworking person,' you could provide specific examples of how you have demonstrated these qualities in your previous role. This will not only showcase your abilities but also make your letter more memorable.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
The letter demonstrates a basic understanding of grammar, but there are some errors that need to be addressed. Pay attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles. For example, in the second paragraph, 'Althoug h I have bee n working' should be corrected to 'Although I have been working'. Review your letter carefully for these types of errors to improve your grammatical accuracy.

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