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Band 5+: An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Riya,

I am excited to write this letter as I got to know about your upcoming trip to India and I cannot wait anymore to meet you. I would recommend you to plan your visit during January as earlier I do have a plan to visit Goa with my office colleagues. So i request you to join our company in order to explore beaches of Goa. Goa has mercerising waterfalls, forts with authentic food and drinks.

We have booked a luxurious Hilton hotel with beautiful sightseeing for a week. The apartment is located at the centre of the city which makes our trip convenient to travel. I have also booked a rented bicycle in order to enjoy mesmerising views around the hotel. All the famous beaches are located within 1 km of the resort.

I am looking forward to hearing your plans. I just can’t wait to show you the beautiful beaches and waterfalls.

Best wishes,

Diyuti

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
beaches: 3
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Task Response

4.5
The letter partially addresses the task by recommending the best time to visit and describing the types of accommodation. However, the recommendation lacks explanation and the description of accommodation is limited. Additionally, there is no mention of what the writer would like to show the friend in their country. To improve, provide a more detailed recommendation for the best time to visit, elaborate on the types of accommodation available, and include specific places or activities the writer would like to show the friend.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues. The message is not consistently easy to follow due to the lack of clear organization and development of ideas. Additionally, there are some noticeable lapses in cohesion, such as abrupt transitions between ideas and lack of paragraphing. To enhance coherence and cohesion, consider organizing the letter into distinct paragraphs and developing each idea more fully.

Lexical Resource

5.5
The letter demonstrates a fairly wide range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and some repetition. Additionally, the use of vocabulary lacks precision and sophistication. To improve, use a wider variety of vocabulary with more precision and sophistication, and ensure accuracy in word choice and usage.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5
There is an attempt to use a range of structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and inaccuracies throughout the letter. Punctuation is also inconsistent. To enhance grammatical range and accuracy, work on using a wider variety of grammatical structures with more accuracy, and ensure consistent and appropriate use of punctuation.

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