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Band 8+: Asking for a Letter of Reference You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: • give details of the job • explain why it is important to you • suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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Dear Mrs Thompson,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to ask if you would be willing to provide me with a letter of reference for a position I am currently applying for.

The role is for a Manager Assistant at a well-established advertising firm. The position involves project time, coordination, and stakeholders communication. It is particularly important to me because it represents the first step toward building a long-term career in manager assistant.

If possible, I would be grateful if you could mention my academic performance in your Business Studies class, particularly my final research project , as well as my teamwork and communication skills. Any reference to my reliability and commitment would also be highly valuable.

Thank you very much for considering my request. I truly appreciate your support.

Kind regards,

Lorena

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Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear details about the job, its importance, and specific information the teacher could include in the reference. The tone is appropriate and the letter is well-organized. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is effective, and the transitions between ideas are smooth. The purpose of the letter is immediately clear, and each paragraph logically builds upon the previous one to support the request for a reference.

Lexical Resource

A good range of vocabulary is used appropriately. Terms like 'well-established advertising firm,' 'stakeholders communication,' and 'reliability and commitment' are well-suited to the context. The language is professional and conveys the necessary information effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a strong command of grammar and sentence structure. There are no noticeable errors, and the punctuation is accurate throughout. The sentences are well-constructed and contribute to the overall clarity and professionalism of the letter.

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