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Band 5+: Now a day people have started preferring online shopping for convenience. Does this give the same advantages as perceived by the people or does it have higher disadvantages. Discuss

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The image shows a table divided into two columns, "Advantages" and "Dis Advantages" of "Online Shopping." Under Advantages, eight items are listed: Shopping at one click, Save time money energy, wide array of Choices, facility of plastic money, offers and discounts, 24 x 7, fixed prize, replacement, and home delivery. Under Dis Advantages, nine items are listed: unemployed businessman, cheating -quality and quantity, cyber crime, Overbuying, lack - face 2 face communication, need internet connection, electric supply, useless - computer illiterate, - countryside, and dependent on technology. Below the table, there's a section titled "Important sentences," but no content is visible in this section.
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Nowadays people use online shopping sites like temu , trendyol , amazon , and etc . By this way,people save time , make it easier . But it has also disadvantages and advantages .

Shopping online give some confidence to users . For example , in magazine there are limited things , but in online shopping you choose your product in millions.Also you dont expend your energy as going magazines . Thirdly , it hasn’t time limit like in magazines.This way more relevant to people who works in morning .

However,it has disadvantages also.Firstly,it makes decrease job places for unemployed people . Secondly , The seller can cheat on u . For example , the quality of product may be worse than u thinked . Other disadvantages of shopping online is depent on technology . There are no rules like everybody knows technological machines . This is a huge problem for these people .

İn my opinion , online shopping will replace magazines . Because it is more easier , more comfortable , more fixed prized.

İn conclusion , İf seller and buyyer will be careful about shopping there no doubt to shop online .

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
online: 6
shopping: 5
people: 4
disadvantages: 3
there: 3
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Task Response

6
The response addresses the task by discussing the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. However, the arguments presented are somewhat simplistic and lack depth. The essay could benefit from more specific examples and a more nuanced discussion of the issues. The structure is clear, but the conclusion could be stronger and more insightful. To improve, focus on developing more complex arguments and providing detailed support for your claims.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The essay demonstrates some organization, but the flow of ideas is not always smooth. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, using transition words like 'furthermore,' 'in contrast,' or 'therefore' can help connect ideas more logically. The introduction and conclusion are present but could be more developed to provide a clearer framework for the argument.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There are instances of informal language (e.g., 'like temu, trendyol, amazon, and etc.') and some inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., 'going magazines'). To improve, focus on using more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of online shopping. Consider using a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay attention to common errors and seek feedback on your writing to identify areas for improvement.

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