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The image shows a line graph detailing the number of visitors per month in summer 2013 (in thousands) to three museums. In June, the British Museum had 600, the Science Museum had 400, and the Natural History Museum had 500. In July, the British Museum had 700, the Science Museum had 300, and the Natural History Museum had 500. In August, the British Museum had 500, the Science Museum had 300, and the Natural History Museum had 400. In September, the British Museum had 400, the Science Museum had 400, and the Natural History Museum had 500.

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The provided line graph compares the number tourists travel 3 various museums, such as the British Museum, the Science Museum, and The Natural History Museum per month in summer, 2013.

Overall, the number of visitors of the British Museum and the Science Museum increased, while the amount of travellers of the Natural History Museum declined throughout the given period, and the British Museum was much more productive compared to others.

Regarding to the British Museum and the Science Museum, their initial quantity of travellers were 600,000 and 400,000, respectively. The number of visitors of the Science Museum declined slightly by August (300,000), and increased to roughly 450,000 in September. On the contrary, the fluctuations were shown for travellers of the British Museum. The number of them rose to 750,000, then declined 500,000, and increased again to 650,000 in July, August, and September, respectively.

According to the Natural History Museum, the volume of visitors was 550,000 in June, it decreased to roughly 370,000 in July, and maintained the same level in August, while it rose to around 470,000 in September.

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museum: 12

british: 5

number: 4

science: 4

natural: 3

history: 3

visitors: 3

increased: 3

travellers: 3

declined: 3

august: 3

september: 3

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trends are mentioned, but the specific data points are not always accurate. The report could benefit from more precise data reporting and a clearer structure. For example, the overview could be more concise and focused on the key trends. Also, the body paragraphs could be organized more logically, perhaps by grouping the museums differently or by discussing each month separately.

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The report is generally understandable, but the flow could be improved. The organization into paragraphs is present, but the transitions between sentences and ideas within paragraphs could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow of the report. For example, using transition words or phrases at the beginning of sentences to connect them to the previous sentence.

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The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the data. However, there are instances where the word choice could be more precise or natural. For example, consider using synonyms for words like 'number of visitors' or 'increased/decreased' to add variety and sophistication to your writing. Also, ensure that the vocabulary used is appropriate for the context. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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