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Band 4+: On a recent Holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In letter Explain the item you lost, Explain how you lost it, Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to report an incident, while on a holiday at Macau, I lost my laptop, it was Apple Mac book pro and it was detailed in my insurance policy beforehand.

I was sitting in a cafe and having lunch on my table, while I went to bathroom and came back after several minutes, they all gone. I asked the local cafe owner about the incident, he replied that he had not noticed anyone to take all this. I immediately reported an incident to the local police and associating the copy with my claim.

As my travelling covered under an insurance policy, therefore, I am attaching my account details to reimburse the amount into my bank account.

If you have any query, feel free to contact on my email or phone.

Best Regards

Paul

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

4.5

The letter partially addresses the task by explaining what was lost and how it was lost. However, it lacks clarity in what the writer wants the insurance company to do. It would be beneficial to explicitly state what action or assistance is being requested. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of information. Consider organizing the content into clearer paragraphs to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but some words are repetitive, and there are instances of awkward phrasing. Try to vary your word choice and work on expressing ideas more naturally.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors present, such as missing articles, incorrect verb tenses, and punctuation mistakes. Proofreading for these errors is recommended.

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