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Band 5+: Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of secondary school teachers under 30 years of age in four countries between 2010 and 2017. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image contains a line graph showing the percentage of secondary school teachers under 30 in four countries from 2010 to 2017. The data is as follows: Brazil started at 5.5% in 2010, then 9.8% (2011), 9.5% (2012), 6.8% (2013), 8.5% (2014), 5.8% (2015), 5.5% (2016), and ended at 6.5% (2017). Luxembourg's figures were 18.5% (2010), 14.2% (2011), 15.8% (2012), 12.5% (2013), 11% (2014), 10.5% (2015), 10% (2016), and 10% (2017). Japan's percentages were 9% (2010), 11% (2011), 10.8% (2012), 10.8% (2013), 14% (2014), 14.2% (2015), 15% (2016), and 15.5% (2017). The Czech Republic's data was 20% (2010), 18.5% (2011), 18% (2012), 17.5% (2013), 17% (2014), 16% (2015), 14.8% (2016), and 13.8% (2017).
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The line graph provide data on the rate of teachers lower than 30 years old teaching in secondary school in different country from 2010 to 2017.

Overall the proportion of teachers under 30 in secondary schools in Japan and the Czech Republic has increased, while the opposite trend could be see in figure for other countries. However, the Czech Republic maintains the lowest rate in this group despite the growth.

As for the Japan and Czech Republic, the proportion of instructor under 30 years old

from secondary school accounted nearly 9% and 6% respectively. The figure in Czech public increased dramatically to 10% in 2011 before experienced a slight fluctuation in next 6 years and finishing at nearly 9% in 2017. While after rising slightly to 11% in 2011, the figure for Japan remained unchange in next to years, before increasing dramatically to 15% at the end of the period.

Regarding to Brazil and Luxembourg, the percentage of Brazil secondary schools teachers start at 20% which was higher than the figure for Luxemborurg, at around 18%. While the Brazil figure decline consitantly to 18%, Luxembourg witness a plummet to 10% by 2017

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
figure: 5
years: 4
secondary: 4
czech: 4
teachers: 3
japan: 3
republic: 3
while: 3
brazil: 3
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Task Response

6
The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and some misunderstandings of the data. The structure is present, but the details provided are not always correct. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and avoid misinterpreting the trends. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas is not always smooth. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, the connections between the overall trends and the specific details for each country need to be clearer. The organization of details within each paragraph could also be more logical.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('rate of teachers lower than 30 years old'). There's a reliance on basic vocabulary, and a lack of more sophisticated terms to describe trends and comparisons. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased steadily,' 'fluctuated significantly') and comparisons (e.g., 'considerably higher,' 'slightly lower').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. These include incorrect verb tenses ('could be see'), subject-verb agreement issues ('the proportion...has increased'), and awkward phrasing ('the proportion of instructor under 30 years old from secondary school accounted nearly 9%'). Sentence structure is also often basic, limiting the complexity of the information conveyed. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy in verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage.

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