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Band 6+: Task 1: The maps below show the present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays two floor plans labeled "Present Office Building" and "Future Office Building." In the present layout, sections include kitchen, canteen, storeroom, WC, grass area, entrances, and multiple office rooms. The future layout modifies the structure, featuring outdoor seating, a meeting area, and a coffee machine while retaining office and storeroom sections, removing grass, and rearranging entrance locations.

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The illustration describes the current layout of an office building and its proposed refurbishment.

Overall, the infrastructure is planned to undergo considerable shifts, notable with the cut-off of green space, the relocation, and introduction of several facilities.

In the future plan, there will be no green area on both sides of the building. Instead, a new outdoor seating area and a meeting section are expected to be installed on the left and right, respectively, both paired with several chairs for the staffs. Nearby that, restroom is predicted to be relocated to the top right corner.

Entering the structure, small-sized office rooms will be connected to larger ones for multiple purposes, put surrounded the entrance. A fair distribution of these is true with two will be built next to a storeroom, which is space for kitchen and canteen. To compensate for that loss, a coffee machine will be installed in the midst of the toilet and storeroom

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the diagrams and provides a reasonable overview of the changes. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions. To improve, ensure all significant changes are mentioned and described accurately. Also, pay attention to sentence structure and word choice for clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report generally presents a clear overview of the changes. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping changes thematically or spatially to enhance coherence. For example, discuss all changes related to the exterior before moving inside. The final sentence is a bit awkward and disrupts the flow; rephrasing it would improve cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and generally appropriate for the task. Terms like 'refurbishment,' 'considerable shifts,' and 'infrastructure' are well-used. However, there's room to incorporate more precise vocabulary related to architectural changes and spatial descriptions. For instance, instead of 'cut-off of green space,' you could use 'elimination of the green area' or 'removal of the green space.' Varying your word choice further would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. For example, 'put surrounded the entrance' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Also, 'A fair distribution of these is true with two will be built next to a storeroom, which is space for kitchen and canteen' is awkward and contains grammatical errors. Focus on ensuring subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and clear sentence structure to improve grammatical accuracy.

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