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Band 4+: The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows the percentage of household budget spent on various necessities in China for 1995 and 2011 with 1995 data being: Food 68%, Clothing 19%, Medicine 4%, Household 9%, and 2011 data being: Food 59%, Clothing 18%, Medicine 11%, Household 12%.

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The pie chart demonstrates, percentage of household expenses on four fundamental categories namely food, clothing, medicine and household goods in 1995 to 2011 in China.

In general, what stands out of the chart, budget for food was the greats part, while budget for household goods was poor for the given period.

If we looking at details, in 1995 more budget was allocated for food in contained 68% but, in 2011 compared to 1995 chart was decreased to 9%, and reached 59%. As regards spending on clothing allocated 19%, likewise in 2011 budget for clothing increase 1% and reached 18% in 2011.

On other hand, in 1995 household goods in contained 4% but in 2011 for households goods more allocated, and likewise 1995 chart increased 8%,also reached this chart 12%. Evidently, in 1995 more allocated for medicine compared to 2011, looking at 1995 allocated for medicine 19%, but in 2011 on medicine, percent decrease 8%,also medicine in 2011 achieved 11%.

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medicine: 5

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goods: 4

budget: 4

clothing: 3

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and proportions. Use synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of language. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'allocated,' consider words like 'spent,' 'designated,' or 'earmarked.'

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