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Band 5+: The chart below show the percentage of boys and girls aged 5-14 years who took part in organised cultural activities and sport in Australia in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two bar charts: one for "Cultural Activities" and one for "Sport." In the "Cultural Activities" chart, boys and girls participated in Drama (6 boys, 4 girls), Dancing (7 boys, 22 girls), Singing (4 boys, 6 girls), and Playing Musical Instruments (11 boys, 10 girls). In the "Sport" chart, 70 boys and 40 girls participated.

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The Both graphics illustrate the amount of boys and girls in the age from 5 to 14 who participated in organised cultural activities and sport in Australia in 2003 year.

Overall, there are four categories in cultural activities, drama, dancing, singing and playing musical instrument. A high result was shown in section dancing by girls, where is playing musical instrument was more popular among boys.

Drama and singing section had similar quantity about five percentages. More over the count of boys and girls had analogous percentages. In heading of dancing, girls reached 25 percentages, while boys took less than five percentages. in playing musical instrument boys got 15 percentages but girl stopped at only 10 percentages.

Boys section demonstrated 70 percentages in the sport in Australia, whereas girls got 50 percentages. Also, category of sport had less popularity among girls and in cultural activities. It visually shown the comparison between children in this country.

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percentages: 7

girls: 6

cultural: 3

activities: 3

sport: 3

dancing: 3

playing: 3

musical: 3

instrument: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the charts and making some comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., percentages are not always accurate), and the organization could be improved. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and structuring the report with a clear overview, specific details, and relevant comparisons. Also, avoid using vague language and ensure correct grammar and vocabulary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The introduction is weak, and the overview is not well-defined. The body paragraphs jump between different activities and genders without clear transitions. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'Furthermore') to link ideas and sentences. Improve paragraphing by grouping related information together.

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The vocabulary is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of 'high result,' use 'significantly higher percentage.' Instead of 'analogous percentages,' use 'similar percentages.' Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. For example, 'The Both graphics illustrate...' should be 'Both graphics illustrate...' 'More over the count of boys and girls had analogous percentages' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Proofread carefully and focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure.

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