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Band 4+: The charts below show the percentage of students at an adult education centre taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two pie charts comparing student course enrollments. In 1985: Fitness and dance 22%, Cookery 14%, Music appreciation 8%, Local history 10%, Modern languages 24%, Art 17%. This year: Fitness and dance 22%, Cookery 19%, IT 27%, Modern languages 17%, Art 15%.

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two pie charts compare the percentage of students taking a different courses in 1985 and this present years.

overall, modern language is the most popular in 1985, while IT become popular in this year. in addition, music appreciation and local history disappeared when IT was introduced.

in 1985, 24% student takes a modern languages. include french, german, and spanih. meanwhile 22% choose fitness and dance classes. art class for 17%, followed by 15% local history. cookery and music appretiation was the less popular.

today, IT being the most common courses in these years, 27% students attend this class. fitness and dance being the second popular class again after IT. as we can see, modern languages such as french, german, and spanish decrease into 17%. art class also dip into 15%. meanwhile, cookery class slightly increase at 19%. in addition, musoc appretiation and local history was removed when IT was implemented today.

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modern: 3

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local: 3

history: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, presenting the main features of the pie charts and making relevant comparisons. There are a few minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as the percentage for local history in 1985. To improve, ensure all data is accurately represented and consider a more sophisticated structure to enhance clarity and coherence.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt to organize the information, but the lack of clear paragraphing and logical flow hinders overall coherence. Transitions between ideas are weak, and the summary lacks a clear structure. Consider using more effective linking words and phrases to connect ideas and improve the flow of the report. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Furthermore' to guide the reader through the comparison of the two pie charts. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is a limited range of words and phrases, and some word choices are not entirely appropriate for academic writing. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons, such as 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'remained stable,' 'significant difference,' etc. Also, pay attention to using the correct form of words (e.g., 'music appreciation' instead of 'music appretiation'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using a grammar checker to help identify areas for improvement, but always review the suggestions critically.

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