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Band 5+: The charts show what Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains three pie charts showing percentages of Australian school leavers' activities post-secondary school in 1980, 1990, and 2000. In 1980, 50% pursued further education, 40% were employed, and 10% unemployed. In 1990, 38% pursued further education, 50% were employed, and 12% unemployed. In 2000, 37% pursued further education, 55% were employed, and 8% unemployed.

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The pie charts provide information about what school leavers of Australia did after finishing secondary school in selected years 1980, 1990 and 2000.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of employed school finishers experienced significant increase throughout the period, while students who chose further education or who are unemployed, saw varying degrees of decrease.

In 1980, the further education was most popular choice and consisted exactly half of proportion of school finishers, followed by students who are employed by 40%. Meanwhile, the percentage of students who did not get the job showed was the lowest, with 10% of the whole numbers of school finishers.

In 2000, the proportion of students who prefers further education and who are unemployed saw varying degrees of decrease by 23% and 2%, respectively. By comparison, the percentage of students who got the job after a leaving school, rose significantly by 15% and became the biggest proportion school leavers.

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The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate to the task. While mostly accurate, some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated.

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The report contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and coherence. Improvement in grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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