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Band 5+: The diagram below shows the area around a river before and after a flood. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features1 and make comparisons where relevant

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The image contains two three-dimensional diagrams labeled "D Blackstone River" depicting changes in the river's course labeled "Before" and "After." The "Before" diagram shows a meandering river with an oxbow formation. The "After" diagram shows the same river post cutoff, with the oxbow disconnected from the main river and labeled as "Oxbow lake," and the river's course slightly altered in shape. Both diagrams include representations of trees, land, and rocks without specific numerical data.

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The given picture illustrates before and after situation of an area adjacent to a river. Visible differences was observed in between these different situations.

Before flood, there were ten houses situated very close to the way of the flow of Blackstone river. Moreover, there were several trees and a bridge on the river. Eventually all of these were demolished for the cause of flood. The major change occurred in the streamline of the river. Signicant modification in the pathway was the main effect for these changes.

After flood, seperate two water streams was observed. Where one of the water source seems to be confined within a specific area. On the other hand, another streamline almost followed the past streamline of the Blackstone river.

Flood being one of the significant natural calamity cause irrepairable loss to humankind and environment. This is totally evident as many houses, bridge and trees were damaged after the flood situation of Blackstone river.

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Task Response

The report identifies some changes but includes inaccuracies and irrelevant details (e.g., specific number of houses, bridge details). The description of the changes in the river's course is vague. To improve, focus on accurately describing the key changes to the river and surrounding area, avoiding speculation or emotional commentary about the flood's impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a basic overview of the changes before and after the flood. However, the organization could be improved for better clarity. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to connect ideas and guide the reader through the comparison. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'The main difference is' to highlight the relationships between the 'before' and 'after' scenarios. Paragraphing could also be more effectively managed to group related information together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively simple and lacks the precision needed to fully describe the changes in the diagram. To improve, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to geographical features and changes, such as 'riverbank erosion,' 'sediment deposition,' or 'channel straightening.' Avoid overly general terms like 'situation' and 'things.' Also, be careful with word choice; for example, 'streamline' is not the most appropriate term for the river's course.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('Visible differences was observed'), subject-verb agreement issues ('seperate two water streams was observed'), and awkward phrasing ('for the cause of flood'). To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring that your grammar is accurate. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your report.

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