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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six- month in 2011.

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The image displays a line graph illustrating the number of enquiries received by a Tourist Information Office over six months in 2011: in January, telephone enquiries numbered at approximately 400, letter/email enquiries at just under 800, and in-person enquiries at around 450; February saw telephone enquiries remain just below 400, letter/email decrease slightly to 700, and in-person reach 600; March data shows telephone remained around 400, letter/email dropped further to 600, while in-person rose to 800; April noted telephone at 500, letter/email decreasing to 400, and in-person climbing to 1250; May showcased telephone reaching 800, letter/email decreasing to 350, and in-person increasing further to 1600; June recorded telephone peaking at 1600, letter/email remaining steady at 350, and in-person enquiries culminating at 1900.

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The given chart illustrates how many enquiries the tourist information office received over six months in 2011.

Overall, there were significant rises both in person and by telephone questions, while the figure for letter or email experienced considerable falls. In addition, the amount of information received in person was the highest from April onwards.

The number of questions received face – to – face commenced at 450 in January, which had the least enquiries over the period. Then, there were gradual climbs to 800 in March, with a dramatic growth by 500 in April and exceeded the amount of questions by letter or email and by telephone, after which it witnessed steady increases to 1900 in June. Meanwhile, the figure for letter or email stood at 900 initially, which was the largest in January, followed by the moderate fluctuation to 1000 in March and remained unchanged in April and final progressive growths to June.

Finally, the office received the amount of enquiries by telephone with nearly 800 at the beginning, after which it saw slight falls to 500 in March and continued decreasing sharply to nearly 400 after 2 months. In the final month, it registered leveling off, which was the lowest over a six – month interval.

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which: 5

received: 4

enquiries: 3

telephone: 3

questions: 3

letter: 3

email: 3

amount: 3

april: 3

march: 3

after: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the trends in the three categories of enquiries over the six-month period. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and a detailed body. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., letter/email starting at 900 instead of just under 800, telephone starting at nearly 800 instead of 400, and the description of trends for letter/email and telephone is inconsistent with the visual description). These inaccuracies detract from the task achievement. To improve, ensure that the data points and trends are accurately reported based on the visual information. Additionally, some phrasing is unclear (e.g., 'final progressive growths to June' for letter/email, which actually decreased). Focus on precise language and double-check the numbers against the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow of information is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward transitions. For example, phrases like 'which had the least enquiries over the period' and 'final progressive growths to June' are confusing. The paragraphing could be more logical, and the use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear trend or comparison, and use linking words more naturally to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'significant rises', 'considerable falls', 'dramatic growth'). However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices, such as 'the amount of information received in person', 'commenced at', 'witnessed steady increases', and 'registered leveling off'. The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are used repetitively (e.g., 'questions', 'enquiries'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'queries', 'inquiries', 'surged', 'plummeted') and ensure collocations are natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include 'the amount of information received in person was the highest from April onwards' (should be 'the number of enquiries'), 'commenced at 450 in January, which had the least enquiries' (incorrect relative clause), 'exceeded the amount of questions by letter or email and by telephone' (unclear subject), and 'remained unchanged in April and final progressive growths to June' (fragment). Punctuation is also inconsistent, with missing commas and incorrect use of hyphens. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of relative clauses, and sentence completeness. Practice using a wider range of sentence structures accurately.

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