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Band 4+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a graph reflecting inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office over six months in 2011: January - In Person: 400, By Letter/Email: 780, By Telephone: 900; February - In Person: 600, By Letter/Email: 700, By Telephone: 800; March - In Person: 800, By Letter/Email: 700, By Telephone: 1000; April - In Person: 1200, By Letter/Email: 700, By Telephone: 1400; May - In Person: 1600, By Letter/Email: 600, By Telephone: 1600; June - In Person: 1900, By Letter/Email: 400, By Telephone: 1600.

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The diagramm displays the amount of enquires received by the Tourist information Office in one city over the 6 months period in 2011.

Overall, the number of received enquires by telephone and in person are very huge, however, getting by letter or email are experiencing decreasing in present months.

In the start of the month, in January, receiving enquires in person was around of 400 and increased nonstop until the June by approximately 2000 and by having the most enquires received from the least one. Receiving enquires by digital tools experienced a lot of downfalls and growths, by dramatically decreasing between January and february from around of 900 to 800, nevertheless, are growth in numbers to the 1800 in June by having second most received enquires.

Getting enquires by letters and emails in January was approximately 600, but lost their effectivity because of digital tools and decreased in numbers from Marth to May by 700 enquires to 400 requires.

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The report addresses the task and presents some of the main features of the graph. However, there are some inaccuracies and a lack of specific data to support the descriptions. The organization is generally clear, but the language could be more precise and sophisticated. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data references and using a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is difficult to follow due to abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between ideas. Consider organizing the information into more distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific trend or comparison. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link sentences and paragraphs together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies ('diagramm' instead of 'diagram', 'enquires' instead of 'enquiries'). There is also some awkward phrasing ('very huge', 'experiencing decreasing'). Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and data, and pay attention to using the correct word forms and collocations. Focus on using more precise and varied language to describe the data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect preposition usage ('around of 400'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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