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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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The image shows a line graph titled "Number of enquiries to Tourist Information Office" over six months in 2011, with three lines representing "in person," "by letter/email," and "by telephone." In-person enquiries start at 600 in January, dip to 500 in February, rise to 700 in March, then dramatically increase to 2000 by June. Letter/email enquiries begin at 400, steadily increase each month, reaching 900 by June. Telephone enquiries start at 200, slightly decrease to 150 in February, then progressively rise to 1600 by June.

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The line graph illustrates how the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office changed over a six-month period in 2011.

Overall, it is seen that in-person and by telephone experienced an increasing pattern, with in-person enquiries rising more sharply over the period. In addition, by letter/email witnessed a declining trend during the time shown.

As seen in the graph, in January enquiries made by telephone were the most common method, at approximately 900, while the opposite was true for in-person which showed the lowest indicator, at only about 400. Over the following months, in-person enquiries increased significantly, reaching over 1800 in June. Furthermore, enquiries made by telephone rose slightly.

Enquiries by letter/email enquiry started with a relatively good position being higher than in-person enquiries ,but gradually declined over the period.

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enquiries: 6

in-person: 5

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overall trends are mentioned, but the details are not always correct. For example, the report incorrectly states that telephone enquiries were the most common in January and that letter/email enquiries declined. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and avoid misstatements. Also, ensure that you are describing the trends correctly and providing accurate figures to support your observations. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the structure could be improved for better flow. The organization of information feels somewhat disjointed. For instance, the overview mentions increasing and decreasing patterns, but the subsequent paragraphs don't always clearly support these claims with specific data and comparisons. Consider grouping information by enquiry type or time period to enhance coherence. Also, ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and contributes to the overall message.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. The report uses phrases like 'increasing pattern,' 'declining trend,' and 'relatively good position,' which are functional but could be replaced with more descriptive and specific language. For example, instead of 'increasing pattern,' you could say 'experienced a substantial surge' or 'rose dramatically.' Expanding your range of vocabulary will make the report more engaging and demonstrate a higher level of linguistic competence.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, the sentence 'In addition, by letter/email witnessed a declining trend during the time shown' is grammatically awkward and factually incorrect based on the visual description. Similarly, 'Enquiries by letter/email enquiry started with a relatively good position being higher than in-person enquiries, but gradually declined over the period' contains redundancy and grammatical errors. Focus on using correct sentence structures, verb tenses, and prepositions. Proofreading carefully for errors and varying sentence structures will improve grammatical accuracy.

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