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Band 5+: The graph below shows the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart showing transportation preferences among different nationalities: British - Air 40%, Coach 25%, Car 35%, Ferry 0%; German - Air 35%, Coach 15%, Car 30%, Ferry 20%; Japanese - Air 10%, Coach 15%, Car 50%, Ferry 25%; Korean - Air 25%, Coach 20%, Car 35%, Ferry 20%; Australian - Air 15%, Coach 10%, Car 40%, Ferry 35%.

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In the picture below, the type of transportation which used by tourists from different countries when they were in New Zealand in 2004, has been portrayed.

Overall, the chart outlines that tourists were used to use car and airplane more than other type of transport.

As we can see, about 60 percent of British tourists were used their car and they used that more than Geramns where more than 50 percent of them used their car and Australians where less then 50 percent of them used that. Japanese and Korean tourists are less likely to used their car and only about 25% of Japanese and 35% of Korean people used their car.

However, Japanese used airplane more than other tourist when more than 52 percent of them choosed this type of transport. Furthermore, nearly 53 percent of Japanese used coach for traveling and this also was more than other tourists. What is more, about 50 percent of German tourist decided to use ferry for their transpotation in New Zealand.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes some inaccurate information and focuses on less significant details. The overview is very general. The report would benefit from a more selective approach, focusing on the most prominent trends and making accurate comparisons. For example, the figures provided for Japanese tourists using airplanes and coaches are inaccurate. To improve, focus on identifying the key trends and supporting them with accurate data, while avoiding unnecessary detail.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The introduction is weak, and the overview is too general. The body paragraphs jump between different nationalities and modes of transport without clear connections. Transitions between sentences and ideas are often missing, making it difficult to follow the writer's train of thought. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related information effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is a lack of precision in describing the data, and the same words and phrases are used multiple times. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary related to transport, tourism, and data description. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'used,' try 'preferred,' 'opted for,' or 'chose.'

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence construction.

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