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Band 4+: The graph shows the popularity of Pop Music in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph titled "Pop Music Sales (in thousand units)" displaying sales data from 2000 to 2020; 2000: 0, 2005: approximately 25,000, 2010: around 30,000, 2015: about 25,000, 2020: roughly 110,000; noticeable trends include a steady rise from 2000 to 2005, slight increase to 2010, dip back to 2000 levels by 2015, followed by a sharp ascent leading to 2020 peak.

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This line graph illustrates about the famous pop music sales in asia over the past 20 years from 2000 to 2020.

Overall from the above line graph it has been clearly explained in detail that the x-axis represents the years and y-axis the number of sales in pop music is measured in thousand units.

Firstly it has been shown that pop music was in least nearly about 10 thousand in 2000 and showed a drastic change upto 110 thousand in 2020. In the initial stage the pop music sale rose year by year but in 2010 it showed a sudden drop and reached back to its normal stage in 2012

Finally after 2012 that is in 2015 pop music explored a sudden hike nearly 75 thousand and atlast crossed 100k in 2020. Compared to its hike from 2000 to 2020 there were nearly 100k difference in their growth. Hence pop music gave a huge impact over the past 20 years.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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music: 6

thousand: 4

years: 3

nearly: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The report provides a good overview of the main features of the graph, but it misses some key details and comparisons. For example, it doesn't mention the specific sales figures for 2005, 2010, and 2015, and it doesn't fully explain the dip in sales between 2010 and 2015.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report is generally coherent, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased and the paragraphing is not always clear.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used inaccurately or inappropriately. The language is not always precise or sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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