Process Diagram

Band 7+: The image below shows the different stages involved in making paper. Write a 150-word report explaining the information given below.

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The image depicts the paper-making process starting from timber; first, timber is transported and undergoes de-barking using a de-barking machine, followed by chipping in a chipping machine, then it proceeds to either mechanical pulping, chemical pulping, or is processed via a hydrapulper, before advancing to screening and cleaning, and finally arriving at the paper making machine to produce paper.

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The diagram illustrates the production of paper involved in different stages.

From an overall perspective, the diagram consists of three main stages. It begins with cutting the timber by a special machine, and continues with chipping the timber. At the end of the process involves two stages ; screening and cleaning, and making the paper.

Initially, the grown trees turn into timber. Timber is cut by a special machine before the bark is removed from the cut trees. Afterwards, the debarked timber is sent to the chipping machine, where it turns into wood chips.

After being chipped, the chips pass from three processes ; mechanical pulping, chemical pulping, and hydrapulper. Next, mechanical and chemical pulped wood chips are sent to the screening and cleaning process to screen and clean them. At the end of the process, the semi-ready wood chips are sent to the paper making machine to make paper.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

timber: 5

machine: 4

paper: 3

process: 3

chips: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main stages of the paper-making process and presents them in a logical sequence. It includes an overview and describes the key steps from timber to paper. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions: the report mentions 'cutting the timber' before de-barking, which is not exactly as described in the visual (de-barking comes first), and it does not clearly state that the hydrapulper is an alternative to mechanical and chemical pulping. Additionally, the report could be more precise about the flow of materials after pulping. Overall, the response is relevant and sufficiently detailed, but a clearer and more accurate description of the process would enhance task achievement.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized and generally easy to follow. The introduction, overview, and body paragraphs are clearly structured. However, the use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical (e.g., 'Initially', 'Afterwards', 'Next', 'At the end of the process'), and there is a slight repetition of 'the process' which could be varied. The paragraphing is adequate, but the overview could be more concise and better integrated with the rest of the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task and shows a good range of topic-specific terms (e.g., 'de-barking', 'chipping machine', 'mechanical pulping', 'chemical pulping', 'hydrapulper', 'screening and cleaning'). There is some repetition of words like 'timber' and 'process', and the phrasing could be more varied and sophisticated. For example, 'turns into wood chips' could be replaced with 'is converted into wood chips'. Overall, the lexical resource is adequate but not fully flexible or natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with mostly accurate use. There are minor punctuation issues, such as the use of semicolons before lists (e.g., 'three processes ; mechanical pulping...') which should be colons. The sentence 'At the end of the process involves two stages' is slightly awkward and could be rephrased. However, these are minor and do not impede understanding. Overall, the grammar is strong and shows good control.

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