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Band 7+: The maps below show changes that took place at Brighton College between 1970 and 2010.

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The image displays two maps: Brighton College in 1970 and Brighton University in 2010, both featuring a compass rose. The 1970 map is divided by roads and contains Delapore Library in the northwest, University Centre in the northeast, Hall of Medicine and a Dormitory in the southwest, and Science Hall in the southeast. The 2010 map shows Delapore Library, a Coffee Shop, and Granger School of Business in the western section. In the eastern section, it displays the University Centre, a Dormitory, and Science Hall.

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The maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Brighton College in 1970 and in 2010.

Overall, the university has undergone several changes over the years. Some areas were reduced in size, while others were moved to other locations. Some buildings were demolished, freeing up space for new services, such as the coffee shop and the Granger School of Business. Lastly, some elements remained the same throughout the period.

The former university centre located in the eastside of the campus was reduced by half of its original size. By contrast, the new dormitory area next to the university centre was slightly expanded compared to its size in 1970.

Furthermore, the previous dormitory and the Hall of Medicine were shut down. Instead, a coffee shop and the Granger School of Business were built in the area. Finally, some buildings remained unchanged, such as the Delapore Library in the upper-left corner of the map and the science hall in the bottom-right border.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main changes between the two maps. It provides a clear overview and highlights key transformations, such as the reduction of the university centre, expansion of the dormitory, and replacement of the Hall of Medicine with a coffee shop and business school. However, there are minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as the location of the dormitory in 1970 and the unchanged status of the Science Hall, which may not be entirely accurate based on the visual description. The report could be improved by more precise descriptions of spatial relationships and ensuring all mentioned changes align with the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-structured and easy to follow, with a clear overall statement and logical grouping of changes. The use of cohesive devices such as 'by contrast', 'furthermore', and 'finally' helps guide the reader. To achieve a perfect score, consider ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the changes (e.g., one paragraph for size changes, another for new buildings) and that the flow between ideas is even smoother.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally accurate, with good use of terms like 'demolished', 'expanded', and 'shut down'. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'university centre' used multiple times) and a few imprecise phrases (e.g., 'eastside' could be 'eastern side', 'bottom-right border' could be 'southeastern corner'). To improve, aim for a wider range of synonyms and more precise locational language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely correct, with a good mix of simple and complex structures. Sentences are clear and well-punctuated. Minor issues include the phrase 'was reduced by half of its original size' (more naturally 'was reduced to half its original size') and 'the new dormitory area next to the university centre was slightly expanded compared to its size in 1970' (could be more concise). Overall, the grammatical control is strong and only small refinements are needed.

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