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Band 4+: The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris parents . In your letter: Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party Explain why you won't be able to attend the party Give details of plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr and Mrs Collins,

I hope you are well both of you. I am writing to chris’s parents because they celebrate my friend surprise birthday party.

Yes, I think chris will very happy because he is feeling good. His birthday celebration some different types of give party. because he is coming from india sometimes so, he will enjoy this party.

I do not able to party because my father was heart attack in two days. I am going to Dehli and he is not well and Doctor says my father have a done angioplasty. So I have here in ten days. then I will come home together my father.

Let you know about I am meet chris after sometime and when my father is well then I will meet you and together with travelling outside. I have many planned but this time I am not able to meet you as well as I will meet you soon chris.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely.

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Overall Band Score

4
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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
because: 4
father: 3
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Task Response

5
The letter generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some issues with clarity and relevance. The reasons for Chris enjoying the party are vague, and the explanation for not attending, while present, could be clearer. The plan to see Chris at a different time is mentioned but lacks specific details. To improve, focus on providing more concrete and specific information related to each task point. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the intended message. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. The flow of information is disjointed, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are not always clear. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on creating a logical structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use cohesive devices such as transition words and phrases to link ideas and ensure a smooth flow of information. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea, and the sentences within each paragraph should be logically connected.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the range needed to express ideas effectively. There is frequent repetition of words and phrases, and the language used is not always appropriate for the context. To improve lexical resource, expand your vocabulary by reading widely and learning new words and phrases. Focus on using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of language. Pay attention to the specific context and choose vocabulary that is appropriate and precise. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in sentence structure. These errors significantly impede understanding and detract from the overall quality of the writing. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Review and edit your writing carefully to identify and correct errors.

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