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Band 4+: The pie chart below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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The image presents three pie charts for 1972, 1992, and 2012, depicting percentages of five book categories: Adult fiction, Travel, Biography, Children's fiction, Others. 1972: Adult fiction 20%, Travel 15%, Biography 25%, Children's fiction 20%, Others 25%; 1992: Adult fiction 25%, Travel 18%, Biography 15%, Children's fiction 22%, Others 20%; 2012: Adult fiction 45%, Travel 12%, Biography 10%, Children's fiction 25%, Others 12%.

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The pie chart demonstrated the persentage of five kinds of books which sold by bookseller from 1972 to 2012.

Overview, when the Biography, Travel and Others declined, the children’s fiction climbed over the year. Additionally the adult fiction demonstreated significant increase, while others decreased.

At the beginning of the 1972 the slice of children’s fiction, Biography and adult fiction illustrated the same persentage to 20%, while Travel showed lower persentage than others. In 1992 compared with 1972 the the adult fiction increased to 5%, while travel and children’s fiction raised only 2%. The Others and Biography decreased to 5%. In 2012 the adult fiction showed increadable grew to 20%. Although the children’s fiction surged to 3%, Biography, Others and Travel declined approximately to 10%. To sum up everything, the Biography, Others and Travel dropped over the year, while the adult fiction rised steadily.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

fiction: 9

others: 6

biography: 5

travel: 5

adult: 5

children's: 4

while: 4

persentage: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and attempts to compare the data across the three years. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Some mathematical descriptions are confusing (e.g., stating a category 'increased to 5%' when it likely increased by 5 percentage points), and the final summary repeats information already provided in the overview. To improve, ensure that you distinguish between percentage points and percentages, and focus on providing a clear, logical progression of data without repetitive concluding statements. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report struggles with logical flow and organization. While there is an attempt at an overview and body paragraphs, the progression of ideas is often interrupted by awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., using 'Overview' as a standalone sentence starter without proper punctuation or transition). To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and use a wider variety of linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Subsequently', 'Regarding') to connect your observations smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'persentage', 'demonstreated', 'increadable', 'rised'). There is also some repetitive use of words and incorrect word forms, such as using 'grew' (a verb) where an adjective or noun might be expected in certain structures. Aim to expand your range of descriptive vocabulary for trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'remained stable', 'plummeted') and ensure correct spelling to avoid distracting the reader. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and often impede the clarity of the message. There are issues with tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure (e.g., 'the adult fiction increased to 5%' is ambiguous - it is unclear if you mean the percentage increased *by* 5% or *to* a total of 5%). Additionally, there are errors in article usage and prepositional phrases. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures and practicing how to describe mathematical changes accurately (using 'increase by' vs 'increase to').

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