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Band 5+: The pie charts below show the proportion of job postings for Software Engineers, Sales Associates and Teachers in 1995 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image showcases two pie charts comparing data from 1995 and 2020. In 1995, the chart features the numerical values: Software Engineers (15), Sales Associates (40), and Teachers (45). The 2020 chart displays: Software Engineers (30), Sales Associates (40), and Teachers (30).

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The pie charts illustrates the proportion of categories such as Software Engineers, Sales Associates and Teachers in the period of 1995 and 2020.

In general, it is clear, from the charts that proportion of Software Engineers shoot up, while numbers of Sales Associates fall sharply. Additionally, proportion of job posting for Teachers plummet.

The number of Software Engineers was begin 15 in 1995, for the long period it has growing and jumped to 40 in 2020. That proportion is the highest point of increase compared to Teachers and Sales Associates. The proportion of Teachers was 40 in 1995, however because of issues it fall sharply to 30 in 2020.

Furthermore, proportion of job posting for Sales Associates started with 45 in 1995, the number plummet to 30 in 2020 and it was the most noticeable difference in the drop in the chart.

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proportion: 6

sales: 4

associates: 4

teachers: 4

software: 3

engineers: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features and makes some comparisons, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with the language used. To improve, ensure data is accurately represented and pay attention to grammar and vocabulary. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are not always smooth, making it slightly difficult to follow the comparisons. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall structure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat basic and repetitive. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'shoot up,' 'fall sharply,' 'plummet'). To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary and use more precise language to describe the trends and changes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('was begin'), subject-verb agreement issues ('numbers of Sales Associates fall'), and awkward phrasing ('because of issues it fall'). There are also issues with article usage and prepositional phrases. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to enhance clarity.

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