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Band 6+: The pie charts below show units of electricity produced by fuel source in Denmark and Germany in 1978 and 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows four pie charts illustrating electricity units by fuel source, alongside a legend for Coal, Oil, Natural Gas, Hydro Power, and Nuclear Power. For Denmark in 1978, total production was 90 units, comprising Coal 53, Oil 15, Natural Gas 7, and Hydro Power 15. In 1998, Denmark's total production was 160 units, with Coal at 122, Oil at 2, Natural Gas at 2, and Hydro Power at 34. For Germany in 1978, total production was 80 units, sourced from Coal 22, Oil 20, Natural Gas 22, Hydro Power 5, and Nuclear Power 11. In 1998, Germany's total production was 160 units, with Coal at 20, Oil at 20, Natural Gas at 6, Hydro Power at 3, and Nuclear Power at 111.

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The pie charts provide information about units of electricity manufacturing by fuel in two countries (Denmark and Germany) during the period spanning from 1978 till 1998.

Overall, it is clear that there are five various figures (Coal, Oil, Natural Gas, Hydro Power and Nuclear Power). It is obvious that the major units by fuel from coal are required in Denmark; however, the quantity of units from Nuclear Power was significantly greater in Germany.

Regarding Denmark, in the first period total production accounted for 90 units; meanwhile, the majority of units accounted for 53 units; however, 20 years later, it considerably increased to 122 units. The proportion of Hydro Power in Denmark was roughly 15 units at the start of the period and it experienced a rise by exactly 19 units in 1998. The number used by natural gas and oil was around 15 and 7 units; nonetheless, they dropped to exactly 2 units for both of them in 1998.

When it comes to Nuclear Power, the number of fuel used for it in 1978 was approximately 11 units; nevertheless, this number significantly rose to 111 units in 1998. The units of coal stayed the same for all over the period.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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units: 10

period: 4

power: 4

units;: 4

nuclear: 3

number: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, presenting the main features of the pie charts and making some comparisons. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately represented and avoid generalizations that are not fully supported by the data. Also, the final sentence is inaccurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate arrangement of information, generally presenting data related to each country and time period. However, the flow could be improved with clearer transitions between paragraphs and ideas. The 'overall' paragraph is quite generic and doesn't provide a strong summary of the key trends. Consider using more specific language to highlight the most significant changes and differences between the countries and time periods. For example, you could mention the shift in Denmark towards coal and the increased reliance on nuclear power in Germany.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the information, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and sophistication. Words like 'various,' 'major,' 'significantly greater,' and 'considerably increased' are somewhat vague. Try to use more specific and descriptive language to illustrate the changes and differences in electricity production. For example, instead of 'significantly greater,' you could say 'dominated the electricity production' or 'formed the largest proportion.' Also, avoid unnecessary repetition of words like 'units.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, and there are issues with article usage, preposition choice, and verb tense consistency. For example, 'the major units by fuel from coal are required in Denmark' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'The units of coal stayed the same for all over the period' is also awkward. Pay closer attention to sentence structure and word choice to ensure that your writing is clear, concise, and grammatically accurate. Proofreading carefully can help identify and correct these errors.

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