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The image contains two pie charts comparing journeys to and from work in 1959 and 2009; in 1959, 50% used bus, 20% walked, 15% used train, 10% used car, and 5% used other methods, with an average distance of 3.5 km and duration of 17 minutes; in 2009, 35% used car, 25% walked, 15% used bus, 12% used train, and 13% used other methods, with an average distance of 19 km and duration of 42 minutes.

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The pie charts illustrate the changes in the percentages of several modes of transportation used by individuals to visit to their workplaces and return home in a European city in 1959 and 2009.

As an overview, it can be clearly seen that in the initial year walking was accounted for the biggest proportions, whereas car was the common mode of transportation in the final year.

It is immediately apparent from the chart that, in 1959 approximately half of masses preferred to walking for their destination, whereas 15% of people travelled by public transport, such as buses and trains. In contrast, 10% and 5% of people used cars and other mode of transportation, respectively.

Moving further to the remaining details, in 2009 35% people used their personal car. Meanwhile, a quarter of them opted to walk. Conversely, 13% was reached their destination by bus and 15% travelled by train. Similarly, other vehicles was used by 12%.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main trends and comparing the two years. However, there are several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. For example, in 1959, walking is incorrectly described as the largest proportion (the data shows bus at 50% was the largest), and the percentages for bus and train in 2009 are swapped (bus 15%, train 12% in the data, but the report states the opposite). The overview is somewhat misleading. Additionally, some phrasing is unclear or grammatically awkward (e.g., 'half of masses preferred to walking', '13% was reached their destination by bus'). To improve, ensure accurate data representation, provide a clear and correct overview, and refine grammatical structures for clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow could be improved. The second paragraph mentions 'walking was accounted for the biggest proportions' which contradicts the data (bus was 50% in 1959). The third paragraph's transition 'Moving further to the remaining details' is slightly awkward. The final paragraph mixes up the data for 2009 (e.g., bus and train percentages are swapped). To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on one time period or one clear comparison, and use smoother linking phrases like 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' more accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. Phrases like 'half of masses' and 'common mode of transportation' are acceptable but could be more precise (e.g., 'half of the population', 'predominant mode'). There is some repetition of 'used' and 'people'. To improve, incorporate a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'commuters', 'individuals', 'utilized', 'opted for') and more precise terms (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward constructions. Examples include: 'to visit to their workplaces' (should be 'to visit their workplaces'), 'walking was accounted for' (should be 'walking accounted for'), 'half of masses preferred to walking' (should be 'half of the masses preferred walking'), 'other mode of transportation' (should be 'other modes'), '13% was reached their destination' (should be '13% reached their destination'), and 'other vehicles was used' (should be 'other vehicles were used'). The report would benefit from more varied sentence structures and careful proofreading to ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions.

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