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Band 7+: The table below show the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart below show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visits during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a table and two pie charts pertaining to the Ashdown Museum: The table displays visitors numbers at 74,000 before and 92,000 after refurbishment; pie chart before refurbishment shows 15% very satisfied, 30% satisfied, 40% dissatisfied, 10% very dissatisfied, 5% no response; pie chart after refurbishment shows 35% very satisfied, 40% satisfied, 15% dissatisfied, 5% very dissatisfied, 5% no response.

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The table compares the total numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum in the year before and after refurbishment, while the pie charts illustrate the results of visitors satisfaction surveys during the same period.

Overall, the museum experienced a considerable improvement in the total number of visitors upon completion of refurbishment, and the levels of satisfaction rose significantly.

The total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum rose from 74,000 visitors to 92,000 visitors the following year, representing an increase of 18,000 visitors. This suggests that the improvements to the museum attracted more people.

In the year before refurbishment, the proportion of attendees who were “dissatisfied” fell from 40% to 15%, while the percentage of attendees who were “very dissatisfied” accounted for 10% before and 5% after refurbishment. Before the changes, the number of those who were “satisfied” climbed substantially by 10%, while the proportion of “very satisfied” constituted a small minority before the refurbishment rose to a good proportion.

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visitors: 7

before: 5

refurbishment: 5

museum: 4

total: 3

while: 3

number: 3

proportion: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the information from the table and pie charts, highlighting the main features and making relevant comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The report could benefit from more precise data referencing and a slightly more sophisticated use of comparative language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The information is presented logically, and the use of cohesive devices is adequate. However, there's room for improvement in paragraphing and flow. For instance, the transition between the visitor numbers and satisfaction survey results could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the connection between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, appropriate for the task. Terms like 'considerable improvement,' 'rose significantly,' and 'representing an increase' are effectively used. However, there are instances where the language could be more precise or sophisticated. For example, instead of 'a good proportion,' consider using more specific terms like 'a substantial percentage' or 'a significant fraction.' Aim for more nuanced vocabulary to elevate the writing. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures and punctuation. There are a few minor errors, but they do not significantly impede understanding. To improve further, focus on refining sentence structures for greater clarity and conciseness. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Reviewing and editing the report carefully can help eliminate these minor errors.

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