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Band 6+: The table below shows how many people visited the Memphis Museum during the year before and the year after its refurbishment. The charts illustrate survey results on how visitors experienced their visit to the museum during those two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: The table below shows how many people visited the Memphis Museum during the year before and the year after its refurbishment. The charts illustrate survey results on how visitors experienced their visit to the museum during those two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays data regarding Memphis Museum visitors and their satisfaction levels. The total visitor count was 68,000 during the year before refurbishment and 89,000 during the following year. A satisfaction survey conducted a year before refurbishment shows: 42.9% rated as very good, 30.8% as good, 13.2% as bad, 8.8% as very bad, and 4.4% did not respond. Post-refurbishment survey results indicate 45.9% very good, 30.6% good, 12.2% bad, 5.1% very bad, and 6.1% no response.

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The illustration compares the number of visitors during and after the Memphis Museum renovation. The chart below depicts the percentage of visitors’ satisfaction.

Overall, during the year before refurbishment there were fewer attendees than a year after. Comparing the level of approval, people gave more positive comments on the museum after the reconstruction than before it.

During the year before refurbishment, museum had 68.000 visitors in total. 42.9% of people complained about the museum, ranking it as bad. Other 30% described their experience as good. Lower percentage of visitants classify as very good or very bad. Only a tiny fraction of guests gave no response.

On the other hand, during the year after renovation, the museum received more positive responses from visitors. Number of visitants rose to 89.000. Compared to previous trends, the museum received a good overall response from 45.9% of visitors. Another 30.6% of visitors ranked as very good, while just around 17 gave negative feedback. Only a small proportion of the total provided no response.

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museum: 6

visitors: 5

after: 4

during: 3

before: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the data and making relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., '42.9% of people complained about the museum, ranking it as bad' - this conflates 'bad' and 'very bad' ratings). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and avoid misinterpretations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a reasonable overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring the report with a clearer separation of ideas, perhaps dedicating a paragraph to the visitor numbers and another to the satisfaction survey results for each period (before and after refurbishment). This would enhance the clarity and coherence of your writing. Also, ensure that transitions between sentences and paragraphs are smooth and logical to guide the reader through the information effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'visitors,' try incorporating synonyms like 'patrons,' 'guests,' or 'attendees' to add depth to your writing. Similarly, explore more descriptive adjectives and adverbs to convey the nuances of the data. Expanding your lexical range will make your report more engaging and demonstrate a better command of the English language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'museum had 68.000 visitors' should be 'the museum had 68,000 visitors'. Also, 'Other 30% described their experience as good' could be improved to 'Another 30% described their experience as good'. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate article usage. Reviewing and editing your work carefully, or seeking feedback from a proficient English speaker, can help you identify and correct these errors, leading to greater grammatical accuracy.

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