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Band 7+: The table shows the age profile of tourists on backpacking holidays and guided tours in New Zealand in 2005, and the pie chart gives the satisfaction rating of their stay. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents data on tourists in New Zealand through a table and a pie chart. The table shows age profiles for two travel types: for Backpacking, the age distribution is 18-30 at 62%, 31-40 at 23%, 41-50 at 10%, and Other at 5%; for Guided tours, the distribution is 18-30 at 7%, 31-40 at 22%, 41-50 at 57%, and Other at 14%. The pie chart displays a Satisfaction Rating, with 83% for Yes, 10% for No, and 7% for Not sure.

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The shares of people who went to backpacking holidays and guided tours in New Zeeland is given on the table and divided into distinct age groups. The satisfaction level of people who visited the holiday is shown on the accompanying pie chart.

Focusing on the table, the youngest group of people between 18-30 years old chose backpacking holiday by far the most and accounted for 62%, whilst the same group who took guided tours made up only 7%. Proportions of individuals between 31-40 showed nearly equal interest(23-22%) in both types of holidays. Situation with the youngest group repeated among the elderlies, however, the figures were opposite, standing at 10% for backpacking and 57% for guided tours. The both figures for the others did not exceed 14%.

In terms of the percentage of how much people enjoyed the holiday, there was a stark contrast between individuals who loved it and those who did not or were not sure. The overwhelming majority(83%) left satisfied while only 10% did not have a positive review. The remaining 7% were unsure about the holiday.

Overall, it is apparent from the table and pie chart that the older people were, the more they prefered guided tours over backpacking holidays. Additionally, the resort in New Zeeland had lots of positive feedbacks.

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people: 5

backpacking: 4

guided: 4

tours: 4

holidays: 3

table: 3

holiday: 3

group: 3

between: 3

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Task Response

The report comprehensively addresses the task, presenting a clear and well-organized summary of the data. The main features from both the table and the pie chart are effectively highlighted, and relevant comparisons are made. The language is accurate and appropriate, demonstrating a strong command of English. There are no significant omissions or inaccuracies.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, presenting the data from the table and pie chart in separate paragraphs. Transitions between sentences and ideas are mostly smooth, contributing to a coherent flow. However, there are instances where the connection between sentences could be strengthened to further enhance coherence. For example, in the second paragraph, elaborating on why the interest between 31-40 age group is nearly equal could provide a smoother transition. Also, the final sentence in the last paragraph feels a bit disconnected from the preceding discussion about satisfaction levels; consider rephrasing or integrating it more closely with the overall theme.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, effectively describing the data and making comparisons. Terms like 'overwhelming majority,' 'stark contrast,' and 'nearly equal interest' are used appropriately. However, there's room to enhance the sophistication of the language by incorporating more varied and precise vocabulary. For instance, instead of 'loved it,' consider using more descriptive alternatives like 'highly satisfied' or 'extremely pleased.' Also, ensure that the vocabulary used is consistently accurate and contextually appropriate throughout the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. However, there are some grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. For example, 'Zeeland' should be 'Zealand,' and 'the shares of people' could be rephrased for better clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate article usage. Proofreading carefully to identify and correct these errors will improve the overall grammatical accuracy of the report.

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