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Band 5+: Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to you regarding my last purchase from your company called Amazon. I had order the couple of things from the website. Unfortunately, some of the products are broken. I ordered one CD player, a remote for my TV, and a speaker. The speaker that I bought is made by Korean brand called Samsung. It has two inbuilt speaker as well as, a 12W subwoofer.

All the other items are working properly, but the speaker is not working. When I plug it in it started making weird noises. I am afraid to reconnect it with any device. Because I don’t know what happened with it. I tried to shake it gently, I heard something like there is broken bolts or something else.

I am not blaming the company it could be happened while delivering or they sent it by mistaken. I would like to return this speaker. I do prefer to exchange it but, if it is not possible you make a refund on my bank details.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Simran

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

speaker: 5

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by providing details about the order made, explaining what was wrong with the item, and stating what the writer wants the company to do. However, the explanation of the issue with the speaker could be more specific, and the request for a refund or exchange could be clearer.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Consider organizing the information more effectively to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. Try to use more precise and accurate vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are grammatical errors throughout the letter, such as verb tense inconsistencies, punctuation mistakes, and awkward phrasing. Review grammar rules and practice sentence structure to improve accuracy.

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