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Band 6+: Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: -tell him your name and where you are living -describe the problem -suggest what you want him to do for it.

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Dear Sir or Ma,

My name is Olusanya Jolaoluwa and I live at No. 24 Lanre Awolokun, Gbagada Phase 2. I am writing this letter regarding the bad road in front of my house.

The road in front of my house is filled with potholes and these portholes are really causing issues for me and I would like to think the other residents, especially when I am going to work in the morning. Because of this bad road it takes me about 30 minutes just to get out of the estate, which normally should take about 10 minutes and this has really inconvenienced me. Recently, the exhaust of my car was damaged due to the bottom of the car hitting the potholes constantly as I drive on the road.

I would like to suggest that, you get in contact with the company responsible for fixing bad roads in the estate as quickly as possible, so as to avoid further damages to my car and other resident’s vehicles and to save us occupants a lot of time when coming out of the estate.

Yours Sincerely,

Olusanya Jolaoluwa.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear description of the problem and a reasonable suggestion for a solution.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are a few minor issues with sentence structure and flow that could be improved.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter contains a few grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. These errors could be corrected with careful proofreading and editing.

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