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Band 7+: Writing task 1 The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams per person per week

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The image shows a line graph titled "Consumption of Spreads" from 1981 to 2007, detailing usage in grams for Margarine, Low fat & reduced spreads, and Butter. Margarine begins at 90g in 1981, fluctuates slightly around 80g to 100g until 1991, decreases steadily to about 40g by 2007. Butter starts at 140g in 1981, drops to around 70g in 1986, maintains approximately 50g in 1991, then falls gradually to 50g in 2007. Low fat & reduced spreads appear in 1996 at 10g, peaks at around 80g shortly after, and decreases to 70g by 2007.

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The line graph illustrates the consumption of three types of spreads, namely margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, and butter between the years 1981 and 2007.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the popularity of margarine and butter decreased as their consumption fell, while the demand for low fat and reduced spreads increased.

With regard to the quantity of butter consumed, it was about 140 in the first year and rose to about 160 grams before drastically falling to around 50 grams in the last. Likewise, margarine began with around 90, but saw some fluctuations until 1996 before falling sharply to 40 grams in 2007.

Regarding the low fat reduced spreads, they were not popular initially with the intake of just about 20 grams. However, there was a significant rise by almost five times to 80 gms in 2001, before experiencing a decline to around 40 grams in 2007.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

grams: 5

spreads: 4

margarine: 3

reduced: 3

butter: 3

about: 3

before: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the main trends in the consumption of spreads over the given period. It provides an overview and highlights key changes for each spread type. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., butter rising to 160 grams, low fat spreads starting at 20 grams and peaking at 80 grams in 2001) and a minor omission (the final sentence about a bar chart is irrelevant and should be removed). To improve, ensure all data points are accurate and avoid including unrelated information. Overall, the response is well-structured and covers the requirements, but these lapses prevent a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is effective. However, the final sentence about a bar chart is irrelevant and disrupts the flow, which is a significant lapse in coherence. Ensure that all content is directly related to the task.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally precise, with good use of terms like 'consumption', 'fluctuations', and 'drastically falling'. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'grams' used multiple times) and a few imprecise phrases (e.g., 'the intake of just about 20 grams'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more sophisticated expressions, such as 'witnessed a significant surge' or 'experienced a gradual decline'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. There are minor errors, such as missing units ('about 140' should be 'about 140 grams') and a slight awkwardness in phrasing ('they were not popular initially with the intake of just about 20 grams'). Additionally, the final sentence is a fragment and unrelated to the task. Proofreading to correct these issues would enhance accuracy.

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