Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to assert my complaint about plenty of incorrect information that I figured out in the article about Moscow in your travel magazine. Unfortunately, a considerable amount of information was irrelevant. The journalists have described the most popular and visited places but they were not acquainted with some innovations and changes. In the first paragraph The Museum of Modern Art has been mentioned as a fabulous sort of entertainment during weekdays; however, the only day when visitors can attend an exhibition is Saturday. In addition, St Jones’s park was closed for restoration and renovation, although your article declared the opposite data.
There are several significant reasons for my alarm. My city is extremely popular among a majority of travelers; subsequently, international guests will look for any famous attractions. Previously mentioned landmarks are the main sort of entertainment in Moscow. Consequently, imprecise information can significantly shift visitors’ plans.
Fortunately, I am able to suggest you a reasonable solution. The quantity of editions is too small to consider them as detrimental factors for travelers. Therefore, your magazine can request a withdrawal from sale and print another article with fixed data. I am looking forward to your response as soon as possible.
Your fairness,
Maria Jeneti.
