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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project helshe is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say how important New Year is to people in your country describe how New Year is celebrated in your country explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear Brain,

I hope you are doing well, It been month since we last talked. I got your letter yesterday, Stating that you need my help in one of your college project regarding the celebration we had in our Country.

As India is a land of festivals, they also celebrate new year as a festival. It has a same significance as of whole world where a new motives, resolutions build up to follow with starting of the month of January.

Firstly people prefer doing parties with their friends, eating at some restaurants or gathering somewhere to enjoy the moment. While on the other side families get reunited and watch tv shows that are aired mainly for this precious day.

For me, being a introvert person I always celebrate this day going out with my girlfriend. Additionally I always goes to temples and do worship over there and pray for an another peaceful and prospect year and to bless us with harmony.

While these are the thing people in India basically do. Even if you get any doubts about my ideas let me know so that you get an amazing grade in this project .

Best wishes,

Aman

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail and specific examples in the description of celebrations would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some improvements in paragraphing and flow would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

While the message is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is essential.

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